tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4249428156033304821.post8947330247878041796..comments2010-04-28T13:16:44.731-07:00Comments on Ali Chohan-Comp 106 Blog: Reading Response #1Ali Chohan-Comp 106 Bloghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03114425617500690543noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4249428156033304821.post-50236785069278779672010-02-09T12:50:25.504-08:002010-02-09T12:50:25.504-08:00I also chose this chapter exercises. I found it ha...I also chose this chapter exercises. I found it hard to put in the they say and I say to the statements. Even though we were given templates, I found it hard to make them fit correctly. I think you did a good job on exercise 1. I like exercise 2. That a topic i could see on t.v. I also believe those people too.A.A.O.https://www.blogger.com/profile/10844185409706800750noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4249428156033304821.post-13069311721318829022010-02-03T14:35:44.442-08:002010-02-03T14:35:44.442-08:00I like how you handled the first exercise. For F, ...I like how you handled the first exercise. For F, you were creative and did not just use the "They Say" aspect. I like how you kept the "I say" part too. For the Jay Leno monologue, what you say makes a lot of sense, because who would trust a hobo?Deannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07444606618973575159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4249428156033304821.post-46137478291502071922010-02-02T20:40:04.873-08:002010-02-02T20:40:04.873-08:00I really liked your assignment because it was diff...I really liked your assignment because it was different from everyone else's. I especially liked your point B. The religious example I thought was clear and helped me to understand the exercise better. The only thing I would question is point F. You wrote "I'm" which contradicts the whole point of this assignment to use “they say” sentences.Danahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07007260391672867567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4249428156033304821.post-22652199040914311512010-02-02T19:14:21.755-08:002010-02-02T19:14:21.755-08:00I found your assignment much easier to read than a...I found your assignment much easier to read than all the others! The sentences were phrased exactly as I would have done. The only thing that i believe could be improved on is in the monolouge where you made an assumption that all hobos are untrustworthy. Although it is probably true that many are not i do not believe that the assumption should be made for all that we consider to be "hobos". Possibly just a rewording needed.Kimberlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13776847274869405102noreply@blogger.com